There's no guarantee, however, that it doesn't all fall apart after chapter twenty, but up until then, it's decent enough that I'd happily send that part to beta readers. We'll see about the rest of it in the next few work days. As of now, however, I'm not unhappy with it.
I honestly thought it was so much rougher than it turned out (thus far... I know there are really rough spots in the later chapters).
Hopefully the rest of the edits will go just as smoothly. Hopefully.
A short post today, because I really want to get back to editing so I can file this one away for a while.
What are you up to today?